1980. A recurring
theme in literature is the classic war between a passion and responsibility.
For instance, a personal cause, a love, a desire for revenge, a determination
to redress a wrong, or some other emotion or drive may conflict with moral
duty. Choose a literary work in which a character confronts the demands of a
private passion that conflicts with his or her responsibilities. In a
well-written essay show clearly the nature of the conflict, its effects upon
the character, and its significance to the work.
Living
in sin is an outdated concept to those of us living in the present, but back in
the days of corsets and feathered bonnets, the idea of living as man and wife
without being actually married was shocking to say the least. To a young girl
raised from birth to be devoted to the Christian faith and doctrine, the very
idea would be synonymous with degradation and an assurance of hell in the
afterlife. To a young girl hearing this proposal from a broken man who needs
her, and the one man she’s ever been close to, the idea is far more tempting.
This very scenario, the choice to throw her principles away or cling to them
and suffer, is presented to Jane Eyre on the very day she was meant to be
married to the same man, and the choice she makes defines her character and
sets the moral tone of the novel that shares her name.
Jane
was taught at Lowood, a charitable school for orphans comparable in its rules
to a nunnery, from the age of ten to sixteen. In her first year there, she met
everyone who would come to shape her mind from then on, most notably a girl
called Helen Burns. From Helen, she learned much of Christian morality that
escaped her childish mind. Doubtless, more of her religious morals sprung from
Helen than from the mandatory church service the girls attended and the
scrimping man who ran the institution strictly on the principle of debasement.
Helen, a soft, gentle, forgiving girl, is far more likely to capture the
affection of a ten year old girl than a freezing cold church and a freezing
cold man. When Helen dies, she achieves a near sainthood to Jane, further
cementing her importance to Jane’s moral fiber.
Also
at Lowood, Jane meets Maria Temple, who takes on a motherly role in her life.
Ms. Temple is serene, compared to the moon on her introduction, and Jane uses
her as a role model in all she does. As long as Ms. Temple is at Lowood, Jane
is content to be there also, through her six years of training and two of
teaching. Then, however, Ms. Temple is married (notably to a minister, whom
Jane describes as being ‘the only man worthy of such a woman’) and leaves the
school, leaving Jane alone. Without a calming influence, Jane becomes restless
and eager to explore the world, and her true character shines through. Jane is
still young, and still eager to taste all that the world has to offer her. She
is daring, not the docile pale thing she appears to be. With Ms. Temple gone
from Lowood, it is not long before Jane follows her, getting a post as a
governess and making her way into the rest of her life alone.
With
her new job, Jane meets new characters, and the most important person to come
into her life- Mr. Rochester, master of Thornfield, and a harsh, sardonic sort
of man. He represents more than he seems, though, because Mr. Rochester has
traveled. He’s seen all of Europe: France, Germany, Italy, Spain, and he’s more
than willing to share and discuss this knowledge with Jane. Through Rochester,
she finds a freedom she had never had before. She grows closer to her actual
self then, inquisitive and sharp. Not only that, but she becomes Rochester’s
confidante and moral center as he comes to depend on her more and more. Despite
her better interests, she falls in love with him, but the way she handles her
affection is very telling. At the ‘legal bar’ of her brain, she allows her
emotions to rage and pine, but then she carefully allots herself a ‘punishment’
to ground herself in reality. Her inner will is stronger than her inner
passion, and it is a strong hint at what is to come.
To
Rochester’s earnest and true proposal, Jane gives a hesitant yes, sure that he
is tricking her in some way. Once she is assured otherwise, their honeymoon
phase is radiantly happy, but on her wedding day it is discovered that
Rochester has a living wife, and for Jane to marry him would be sinful and
unlawful, to the custom at the time as well as to Jane’s own principles. After
the day has unfolded, and Jane has suffered her grief alone, Rochester makes
her his offer. He gives his story of grief and wrong, and pleads Jane to take
pity on him, and live with him. This presents Jane with a conflict of
interests. Does her responsibility to herself and her moral fiber outweigh her
desire to comfort and soothe the man she loves? Is her real responsibility not
towards Rochester, rather than herself?
Jane
would not be Jane, however, if she bent ‘the laws given by God and sanctioned
by Man’ to her own desires. The choice breaks her, and she compares it to
ripping her own hearstrings, but she chooses to hurt not only herself but the
man she loves in order to keep herself true to the teachings that had been
pressed upon her over her entire life. The decision to leave doesn’t stop at
hurting her physically. It sets her homeless once more, and almost kills her.
Better a death as a righteous woman than a ruined one, however. She makes her
peace with God on death’s door, and she is rescued. The people she meets and
the freedom she earns on her own merit convince Jane that her choice was the
correct one. Instead of being drunk on love but completely degraded, she
becomes a schoolteacher, helping country girls to better themselves and making
her own way in the world free of outside influence. Because of the choice she
made- to leave Rochester and keep true to herself- she finds her own family and
her own fortune. Instead of being Rochester’s woman, she is her own woman, so
when she returns to him, she comes as an equal rather than a dependent.
Jane’s
happiness at the end of the work is the true indicator of the moral nature of Jane
Eyre. It carries the idea that those who make the right choices will always be
rewarded, as well as throwing a strong bone towards feminism. Had Jane chosen
the path that Rochester wanted, she would have become subservient. Instead, she
made her own way with her own life and job, and came back an independent woman
and an equal contributor in her own marriage. Not only did she maintain her
responsibility to herself as a human being, she also kept her own values, and
was rewarded for it. Jane’s choices are indicative of her will as a character,
and her choice to leave Rochester turns the entire book into an argument about
willpower, morality, and marriage in an era where those concepts were seemingly
set in stone.
I like how you have "wow my thesis went everywhere" as a label. The thesis statement at the beginning does what the prompt wanted, so that is good. The only thing is that the author was never mentioned in that first paragraph, and I think that is something that is pretty important.
ReplyDeleteWhile reading I was a little concerned if this was a little too much plot and not enough explanation, but that last paragraph really helped tie it all in for me, and I appreciated knowing the story because I've never read Jane Eyre. By the time I finished, I really understood everything you explained (Jane's moral conflict, etc) and how it worked well with the plot.
Did you do this in only 40 minutes?! Seems hard to believe... :)
Nice job! Your opening paragraph did a great job of grabbing my attention and making me want to read on. It did get to be a little overwhelming since I have never read Jayne Eyre but like Kenzie said, the last paragraph did a great job of tying it together. Just like your first blog though, the length is excessive. If you really were able to do that in 40 minutes then props to you! You do a great job with syntax and language. I really feel as if every line is meaningful and thought through. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteI absolutley loved your opening paragraph! It definitely reels the reader in! Good job with that! But, I do agree with Kenzie. It's a good idea to add the authors name into the thesis or at least the introduction. Your conclusion was amazing! I loved all your anaylsis throughout the body paragraphs. Since I've read Jane Eyre, I now feel like you and I could have quite the conversation on the book. Nice job!
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